I would like someone to go over my essay, rewrite some of it/add about how the Fashion Insitute of Design (FIDM) can help me realize my goals.

questions that need to be addressed
1. What knowledge do you expect to gain from this program?
2. What personal traits do you possess that you feel will allow you to succeed in this program?
3. How do you feel your prior academic achievements will assist you in being successful in this program?
4. Describe your previous or current extracurricular and professional experience and why you feel it may benefit you in this program?
5. Why do you feel completion of this program will benefit you in the achievement of your professional goals?
6. What are your near term and long term aspirations upon completion of this program?

no word limit