Need graphs and photos. The words can go in the speaker notes. Needs to be condensed down. Flow chart, etc. attached jesses for reference.

Clarity: Do the slides follow the 5X5 rule (five lines per slide, no more than 5 slides)?
Design: Do the slides feel cohesive? That is, do all the slides feel like they belong to the same presentation.
Engaging: What do the slides draw attention to? That is, how do they engage the audience visually?