1. What comments from your classmates seem like good ideas and how will you use these comments to enhance your story? Be specific. Include page numbers. For example, based on what Brian said about the way I introduced myself to the reader, I will reread Lopate’s “Turning Yourself into a Character” and make clearer to the reader what kind of family I come from. 

2. What comments are you unsure about but still want to give a try?

3. What questions do you have for your professor? How can I help you use your classmates’ comments to improve in the final draft?