Need more specifics to support process changes.

Lean Manufacturing: Need to eliminate two more steps.
Sustainability:

Provide enough information about improving environmental factors.
Process changes & Issue log:

Explain recommended course of action for each item listed in the issues log, noting the impact of the issue on scope, planning communications, and resourcing based on the identified changes to the process flowchart and the project charter.
Operations management techniques: needs more support.