This report is much better than before with comparion of security features of different communication platforms for remote work.
Here are some improvements needed:
- The objectives in Introduction should clearly and accurately emphasize cybersecurity for working remotely and focus on security of video communication to be consistent with your later discussions.
- Rewrite and should identify various information security risks related to remote work to be relevant to your objectives and focus. Cite the sources of your findings.
- Section III should be renamed “Methodology” and identify and briefly describe the communication platforms you have selected for comparison – Zoom, Google Meet, Teams in a new subsection C.
Subsection B. Workplace Security should be rewritten and focus on communication and data security for remote work.
- Evaluate and back up your listed pros and cons on security features of each of the 3 conferencing platforms. Personal comments from you alone will be very weak.
