College Students and the Students Debt Crisis

It’s a bibliography essay and the work is not really relevant with class and there’s a few errors.

– The word “relevant” is being used in every paragraph which is repeating, and it does not relate with the information with the source.
– Introduce the author to the reader.
– Add information relevant to the source and what the annotated bibliography information says, what the annotated bibliography says the essay should include and what to EXPECT.
– rewrite the sentence “whenever it is college admissions season, misrepresentations of stories about how college is supposed to be and debates about student debts are the norm. ” With more clarity.